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Old 01-15-2004   #1
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"To Think"

"To Think"

I'm sorry I was a fool for you girl.
I thought you could be special.
Don't get me wrong, You are.
Just not so much anymore.
You'd probably break my heart.
As well as my dream.
Heh. What am I saying?
None of that could ever be.
Only because now,
We aren't "we."
Maybe it is in you,
To do such a thing.
But I wouldn't know.
You pulled out too early.

One night is all we had.
Too bad it meant nothing.
To think it was something.
To think we could start something.
To think we could be...
Such a fool I am.

In the dark again.
The hand that reaches out,
I cannot see.
Alone again.
Wanting out.
Maybe in the future,
I will find thee.
-Matthew C. Romo-
1.15.04
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Old 01-15-2004   #2
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Re: "To Think"

that's good MCR, i like the last stanza especially
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Old 01-17-2004   #3
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Re: "To Think"

you think i should give this to her?

how would you feel if i gave it to you?
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Re: "To Think"

if you think she'll like it, yeah, for sure.
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Old 01-17-2004   #5
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Re: "To Think"

that's the thing.

what did this shit say to you?
see, its not about love or anything. just how i feel now.

Pretty much, to me, it says, damn girl. youre beautiful. can we have a chance at this , and make it work? no...well aightthenlate. sorry, guess i was just acting dumb in thinking something would have happened.
and the last stanza, really just a heads up for me. keep on looking.
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yeah, i didn't see it as a love thing, i saw it as a snapshot of a point in time, and how you felt about what happened.
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Old 01-17-2004   #7
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Re: "To Think"

hell yeah.

damn you said it.
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Old 01-17-2004   #8
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Re: "To Think"

Good luck man! It's a really good poem
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Old 08-10-2004   #9
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Re: "To Think"

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It's a really good poem ...
... gone to waste.



the fuck was the point to writing this[poem]?
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Re: "To Think"

I thought it was good as well. You should give it to her, to show her your thoughts on the whole thing.
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In the dark again.
The hand that reaches out,
I cannot see.
That was really nice.
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You'd probably break my heart.
As well as my dream.
What exactly did you mean by this one, though? Was it because she 'pulled out too early'? Really nice work, bro.
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Re: "To Think"

That's kinda how I've been feeling these days. Sad, but that's life. Oh, well. Thanks for puting the poem here. Don't be sorry for writing it.
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Old 08-12-2004   #12
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Re: "To Think"

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I thought it was good as well. You should give it to her, to show her your thoughts on the whole thing.



What exactly did you mean by this one, though? Was it because she 'pulled out too early'? Really nice work, bro.
i think i gave this to her. heh. it's a wierd relationship now. the only time any of us like, really like each other, is when we're drunk. otherwise we hardly talk, we act all shy, and hold everything back. been awhile since i've seen her now...did talk toher yesterday though. haha.


and that's exactly what i meant there. cuz i probably would have fallen for that chick, and she wouldnt have wanted it that way. my heart, plus my dream.
i was assuming that later she would want to break up or whatever. but i dont know. she pulled out too early. left the game...heh
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