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Old 05-08-2005   #1
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My Personal Writing Thread

Just so I don't clog up this forum with 100 bazillion different writings, I decided to put them all in this thread. Kapeesh?

"That One Special Girl"

I forgot to get better
The love's in the letter
I'll read your words
Because you're that special girl

All that I want
Is all that you have
And all that you give
Is something to live for

And you'll be that big part of my world
Because you're that one special girl
And you'll be that big part of my world
Because you're that one special girl

Even if you close my eyes
I'll still be able to see you
And if I'm still able to see you
Then I won't have to worry

You are the answer
You're the cure for this cancer
You're a big part of my world
Because you're that one special girl
Because you're that one special girl
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Old 05-09-2005   #2
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"Noone"

The catalyst
The grueling apathy
The unwanted guest
Full of treachery

I think I'm fading
I want to live it
Take my heart
I don't want to be alone

I'm moving
The revolving emotions
It's so soothing
When the world stops its motion

I will not let my life fall to you
Because I am more than just someone
I will not give my life to you
I have my soul and you have the gun
Now I'm left with nothing true
Now I'm left being absolutely
Noone
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Old 05-09-2005   #3
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I like your style man. I can relate to your work. Keep it coming.
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Old 05-11-2005   #4
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread

"The Altimatum"


Sometimes it never seems to show
It was something I didn't know
But it seems the lie is never shown

The broken will need more than a cast
Are you sure of what you're feeling?
It's more than you wanting it to last

The heart needs help to mend
Are you sure you meant your words?
Cutting won't stop what was already said

The eyes will always stay blind
Are you sure of what you see?
Your love is something you can't define

You say you love
But are you really sure?
Your words were never enough to trust
Your words were never enough to trust
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Old 05-11-2005   #5
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread

i like your style of writing
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Old 05-12-2005   #6
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your work is great, its full of emotions, keep writing i'de love to read more of your work
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread

Thanks Lady-luck. Here's another one:

"Heart Eclipse"

The moon now has now settled on the afternoon
The lifetime effect will be over soon

The sun was stolen apart
The love is what it's not

Burn in the fire
Of all empty desires
And you can recollect the pain
And love all over again

The ending's assured
I know your vision is blurred
The shallow minded come down
With stupidity as their crown

If only they could see
Maybe they'd believe
What's in store for their hearts
But it'll be too late when it's broken apart
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yeh those are good, keep writing
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"Feel"

I can't go on
I feel the shame
I need to change
Or I will break away

I won't deal with you
I can't stand the lies
I need the truth
Or else I won't even try

Try to feel
The inside of my soul
Try to feel
The grasp of my heart
Try to feel
Before the anger starts
Before the anger starts
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"Beauty"
It all comes to this sigh
When I look back and I ask
"Why?"
"Why did I even deny?"
You have that beauty in your eye
You have that beauty in your eye

No, I won't cry
I'm tearing these feelings back tonight
So skip the goodbyes
Because even from a distance
You'll still be my shining light

I just want to make things right
I wish you and I
Were just together tonight
But it comes all down to this sigh

Maybe it was just your reaction
Or maybe there was no attraction
I just wish you and I
Were together just for one night
You still have that beauty in your eye
You still have that beauty in your eye
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"Mistaken"

Rushing into the light
Rushing into the unknown
Enter your zone
But I won't enter without you
I won't enter alone

Tempted by the visual sea
Mesmerizingly
And I go down
And I go down

Reflection
Your perfection
Blinding me of all your flaws
What deception

And I found the hole
And I found the hole

Free me
From the other side
Free me
Even if it's temporarily
Cast me away
From the mourning

Never I want to see me
Feel this insecurity
Never I want to feel
The pain of this ordeal

Why won't you just be mine?
Please don't the mistaken part of my life
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