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05-08-2005
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My Personal Writing Thread
Just so I don't clog up this forum with 100 bazillion different writings, I decided to put them all in this thread. Kapeesh?
"That One Special Girl" I forgot to get better The love's in the letter I'll read your words Because you're that special girl All that I want Is all that you have And all that you give Is something to live for And you'll be that big part of my world Because you're that one special girl And you'll be that big part of my world Because you're that one special girl Even if you close my eyes I'll still be able to see you And if I'm still able to see you Then I won't have to worry You are the answer You're the cure for this cancer You're a big part of my world Because you're that one special girl Because you're that one special girl |
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05-09-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
"Noone"
The catalyst The grueling apathy The unwanted guest Full of treachery I think I'm fading I want to live it Take my heart I don't want to be alone I'm moving The revolving emotions It's so soothing When the world stops its motion I will not let my life fall to you Because I am more than just someone I will not give my life to you I have my soul and you have the gun Now I'm left with nothing true Now I'm left being absolutely Noone |
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05-09-2005
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I love my brother.
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
I like your style man. I can relate to your work. Keep it coming.
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05-11-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
"The Altimatum"
Sometimes it never seems to show It was something I didn't know But it seems the lie is never shown The broken will need more than a cast Are you sure of what you're feeling? It's more than you wanting it to last The heart needs help to mend Are you sure you meant your words? Cutting won't stop what was already said The eyes will always stay blind Are you sure of what you see? Your love is something you can't define You say you love But are you really sure? Your words were never enough to trust Your words were never enough to trust |
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05-11-2005
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I would run away with you - hawiianice
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
i like your style of writing
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05-12-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
your work is great, its full of emotions, keep writing i'de love to read more of your work
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05-13-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
Thanks Lady-luck. Here's another one:
"Heart Eclipse" The moon now has now settled on the afternoon The lifetime effect will be over soon The sun was stolen apart The love is what it's not Burn in the fire Of all empty desires And you can recollect the pain And love all over again The ending's assured I know your vision is blurred The shallow minded come down With stupidity as their crown If only they could see Maybe they'd believe What's in store for their hearts But it'll be too late when it's broken apart |
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05-13-2005
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Bleed to the red
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
yeh those are good, keep writing
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05-13-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
"Feel"
I can't go on I feel the shame I need to change Or I will break away I won't deal with you I can't stand the lies I need the truth Or else I won't even try Try to feel The inside of my soul Try to feel The grasp of my heart Try to feel Before the anger starts Before the anger starts |
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05-14-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
"Beauty"
It all comes to this sigh When I look back and I ask "Why?" "Why did I even deny?" You have that beauty in your eye You have that beauty in your eye No, I won't cry I'm tearing these feelings back tonight So skip the goodbyes Because even from a distance You'll still be my shining light I just want to make things right I wish you and I Were just together tonight But it comes all down to this sigh Maybe it was just your reaction Or maybe there was no attraction I just wish you and I Were together just for one night You still have that beauty in your eye You still have that beauty in your eye |
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05-21-2005
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Re: My Personal Writing Thread
"Mistaken"
Rushing into the light Rushing into the unknown Enter your zone But I won't enter without you I won't enter alone Tempted by the visual sea Mesmerizingly And I go down And I go down Reflection Your perfection Blinding me of all your flaws What deception And I found the hole And I found the hole Free me From the other side Free me Even if it's temporarily Cast me away From the mourning Never I want to see me Feel this insecurity Never I want to feel The pain of this ordeal Why won't you just be mine? Please don't the mistaken part of my life |
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