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Old 07-14-2004   #1
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Dont Leave Me...

Ok first off this is not mine, this is something my girlfriend wrote for me a few months back...I think its a beautiful piece an it honstly brought tears to my eyes...I think you can tell why when you read it, writen from the heart with deep love..

Don't leave me

a thousand chances have passed me by,
for some reason why,
I let them all pass by,

But not this time,
I won't let you pass me by,
as i try to understand,
so stay a while,

we can do this together,
It's all about trial and error ,
who cares,
mistakes are to be made,
as long as you stay,
don't let your feelings fade,
don't wait to late,
to tell me how you feel,
the feelings inside us are what makes us real,

we can find a way,
just please stay,
I don't know any other way,
to late to go back to the way ,
things used to be ,
it used to be so carefree,
so simple, so easy
but now things are filled with difficulty,
not wanting to hurt each other,

not exactly each others lover,
one day or another,
that's what we'll be,
it will be perfect,
with simplest of ease,
so please.. Don't leave...
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Old 07-14-2004   #2
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It's great, she really has a way with words. Gooooooood stuff.
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Old 07-14-2004   #3
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Re: Dont Leave Me...

I agree, that's a really good poem. It's emotional in a good way because it helps you empathize with how she feels. Please relay my compliments to her. ^^
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