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Old 10-19-2004   #1
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We all fall one day...

This is a piece I started to write about 2 years ago, when I tried to first break away from song writing to just poetry...to be honest its not really the same as it was then, its more a "based on idea" which just now happens to be finished.....

this also ties perfectly as my last post to other areas of this site, as I am now getting pissed off to say the least with some members of this site....and im not gonna deny it....they are getting to me....so fuck em....I will be here still as musical consultant, as there is a definate lack of compentent musicians left on this site....as now Zero, john, red wizard......these guys arent here no more...so if its music/guitar related, im here for you.....if not....cya...

We All Fall One Day


We stand proud, heads high,
We have it all, we have nothing to shame us,
or to fear...


It's all good, "no worrys son" they say..
"put that money away, its our shout" they will chant,
you feel good, life is good, no grey skys...


But to the unprepared it happens,
the weather changes,
they clouds are formed...


Not even the best weathermen can see it coming,
until it is too late, until it hits with full force,
and that day you fall...


From your pedistol high aloft the tallest spire, you come down,
theres no chanting anymore, theres no cloudless days,
for in the end,

we all fall one day...


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Old 10-19-2004   #2
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Re: We all fall one day...

yeah, nice job! haha, kinda sad, but still good! i like the whole weather part of the poem. gosh, another poem i just cant reply to good enough.
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Old 10-19-2004   #3
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Re: We all fall one day...

oh wow, that's a great poem/song Dean. And it's sad that you'll be semi-leaving
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Re: We all fall one day...

huh?? semi leaving? oh not cool.
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Old 10-20-2004   #5
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Re: We all fall one day...

nice poem darling

you shouldnt leave, its pure defeat. Showing the shits that they won.
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Old 10-20-2004   #6
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Re: We all fall one day...

thanks guys, and rob its a poem.....can you see it as a song or something?

and dont worry those shits havent won, not yet..for do not forget Im still here...not gone yet
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Old 10-20-2004   #7
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Re: We all fall one day...

we're counting the days psychosis, believe me
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Re: We all fall one day...

yeah? well YOU can keep counting, you know you did get to me, but you know what? fuck ya...you are one person...thats all nothing more.
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Re: We all fall one day...

but this one itty little person got to yoooou :P
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Re: We all fall one day...

all I can say is, well done.....does help it was a bad day anyway...but I still say...can ya run?
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Re: We all fall one day...

oooh big whoop i can't run, least thats by no fault of my own :P

whereas i can list a whole lot of things that ARE your fault
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Re: We all fall one day...

go on then
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Re: We all fall one day...

why bother? tyne will get pissed at me and im really not in the mood to annoy her,
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