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Old 01-21-2006   #1
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Life is grand

"Great Day To Die"

(Verse 1)
In my eyes
I see
The flames of tomorrow
Bringing
The next days demise
And I see
Its a great day to die

The sun is blazing
And the horizon burns red
While alone I sift
Through the ashes of the dead

The skies are burning
From the fire in my eyes
Screaming and cursing
Praying God will hear our cries

Why are we living
Theres no way to rectify
Its such a great day
And all thats left to do is die

(Chorus)
Its a great day to die
Close your eyes and say goodnight
Its a great day to die
Bid farewell and say goobye
Its a great day to die
The end is here, close your eyes


(Verse 2)
In my eyes
I see
The flames of tomorrow
Bringing
The next days demise
And I see
Its a great day to die

Spitefire skyline
Bleeding red with my desires
Laughing inside as
They crucify the liars

Hot coals and embers
Building to the disaster
Yet I'm left with me
Playing slave to my masters

Father don't you lie
While I try to justify
That its a great day
Because we know its time to die

(Chorus)
Its a great day to die
Close your eyes and say goodnight
Its a great day to die
Bid farewell and say goobye
Its a great day to die
The end is here, close your eyes


(Verse 3)
In my eyes
I see
The flames of tomorrow
Bringing
The next days demise
And I see
Its a great day to die

Learning the art of
Building funeral pires
Watching them pile
Bodies feeding the fire

Oh God I can't see
Can't see, my eyes are bleeding
This is destiny
And the fires are breading

Mother please don't cry
As I say my last goodbyes
Well its a great day
When all we need to do is die

(Chorus)
Its a great day to die
Close your eyes and say goodnight
Its a great day to die
Bid farewell and say goobye
Its a great day to die
The end is here, close your eyes


Its a great day to die
Say goodbye
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Old 01-21-2006   #2
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Re: Life is grand

that was intense. I liked specifically the verse
"Learning the art of
Building funeral pires
Watching them pile
Bodies feeding the fire"
I liked the imagry conected to this, not nessisarly the image itself, but the fact that it inspierd one. I would love to know what the music sounds like.
I keept playing with the idea that maybe the voice is doing the killing, not nessisarily dieing himself, it was a great hook.
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nice idea.
to die today.

but that's not how it is, Today is not bad. Tomorrow is going to be worse. But if you accept death today, you should at least go out with a smile.

good writing breaker.
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