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Old 02-11-2006   #1
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Things I hate (I must be emo)

I wrote this at 3:00 am last night for absolutely no reason. I thought I was dreaming but when I got up this morning it was sitting there, a little text file on my computer, waiting to be read. It was so emo I thought I'd share it with you guys.

I hate you because now that you're all perfect and wonderful I can't have you. Now that everyone wants you I'm not the person that can say I'm going out with you. Now that you're out of my league you moved up and moved on. I got another you, out of my league, and the same thing is going to happen. It's a different you. It's all you. I am not myself, Joe is not Joe, Jake is not Jake. They are you. It makes me want to kill myself because in killing myself I'd be killing you. In shooting my Tyler you would die. Die you, die die die. I used to think that death was the worst thing that could happen to me, to you. In the long dreamy summer that had all too short a lease. I thought that if I were ever to lose you, lose her, lose myself, I'd lose my heart. Now I wish you would die, damnit I wish you would die, damnit die die. It would be easier to go to your funeral than to see you with him, to avoid places I love to go because you'll be there with him, to avoid places we used to go because the smells bring back memories. On the park bench it says "you plus him" and that makes me sad because that was last November and that him was me. Now that him itsn't me. That him is mocking me. He's all my good traits saying you can't have her. Saying I have her and you don't. And so many guys would pay to have who I have but I don't want who I have I want you. In your cowgirl costume, in the theatre, in the kitcken late at night. In that cold room, on the proch, hanging out and drinking Snapple. You, it is you, it is you, I'll never learn to love again. I hate to love to hate. It's all cold and I feel you away. I felt you away in Arizona, in Portland, in 2004 when nothing and everything was perfect. Damnit, damn you, damn you, damn you. Get away or come back, choose one but not both. Otherwise I hang up this phone.
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Old 02-11-2006   #2
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Re: Things I hate (I must be emo)

lol. will you please stop saying the word, "emo" ? it's fucking retarded.

eh, you should look into your own writing. i think there's something it's saying there. (to you)
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actually. i have writen similar 3 am rants. and as far as rants go it was entertaining.
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Old 02-12-2006   #4
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I really liked it Mudd. I attempted to give you reputation but it wouldnt let me. *Snarles*
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Interesting.

I liked the bit about shooting Tyler.

If this was reworked into some format or another, it would be powerful.
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Damn Hippies...
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Hippies...where?
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I liked the bit about shooting Tyler.
Ahh yes, that's my favorite part too. Tyler is my favorite character from anything. Along with Cooper Harris, Ender Wiggin, Rachel Green, Sam Fisher, Lara Croft and Leon Scott Kennedy. Major rep for anyone who knows what each of those characters is from.
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