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Old 03-25-2005   #1
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For Jason

That smile is still so vivid in my mind
The smile in his eyes
He could have disliked me, but he always smiled.
And that was reassuring.
His eyes told you something about yourself.
They told me that I was special.
But now those eyes have closed.
They’ve closed away from me.
I wasn’t even there to see them close.
I didn’t want to be there.
But now that smile is still so vivid in my mind.
The smile in his eyes.
-Jason
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Old 04-01-2005   #2
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Re: For Jason

erm...i liked it. the wording and all flowed well. very emotional tho. good.
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Old 04-01-2005   #3
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i liked it, made me wish i knew jason and saw the smile you speak about.
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i liked it... keep up the great work ;)
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