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08-23-2005
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Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
Ok this is a weird lil number I just this minute wrote inbetween doing very strange on the spot cowboy parody songs lol..
(Verse) As I was driving down this long highway, I met a man from here going far far away, I offered him a ride to where he was going, and he offered me a knife, plunge'd deep into my back, I lay on the road as he sped away, thinking what had I done wrong? since I woke up this morning.. (chorus) Im not a bastard, im not a prick, Im not a cunt, and im not a dick, but what did I do wrong? to end up dying today.. (Verse) As I was walking down this city street, a pretty lady asked me the time, I said a half past two, and she said thank you, as she slapped me down, and kicked me around, and stole my wallet, my keys, and my heart, and I lay there thinking what have I done wrong? since I woke up this morning.. (chorus) Im not a bastard, im not a prick, Im not a cunt, and im not a dick, but where did I go wrong, to end up dying today... (brigde) I guess im just unlucky, foolish enough enough to die, (chorus) I say Im not a bastard, im not a prick, Im not a cunt, and im not a dick, but where did I go wrong, and what did I do wrong, where did I turn wrong (pause) to end up dying......today...
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
That makes me think of how much I loathe people.
People can offer their hand to others only to have it ripped off... The chorus might be a tiny bit intense though, Dean. No offense.
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
I know its intense....if you actually look at it deep enough to find a full meaning with life, then you've looked to hard, its just another parody style....tis a lil bit of fun..
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
Yeah, I guess it needed to match the angry mood.
Good, nontheless.
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With your eyes, see this moment. With your love, feel this pain. With your heart, find a rhythm. With your hands, hold the rain. I want everyone to remember how precious life is...I didn't think too much about the future until I created it for myself...now I'm a bit more mature and have a beautiful daughter. Don't cheat yourself of a full life, surrounded by the people, things, and memories that you cherish.
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
I've actually played it now about 9 times, I think I have the perfect tune for it now....and its actually given me more Ideas, and for once! this idea might work with all available equipment and means for me....as in my voice, which sucks, BUT on certain numbers works.....hmmm
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
Well, power to you.
I can write, but I'm lyrically defunctory. If my writing could be made into lyric, that would be something.
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With your eyes, see this moment. With your love, feel this pain. With your heart, find a rhythm. With your hands, hold the rain. I want everyone to remember how precious life is...I didn't think too much about the future until I created it for myself...now I'm a bit more mature and have a beautiful daughter. Don't cheat yourself of a full life, surrounded by the people, things, and memories that you cherish.
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Thx for the memories
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
that's interesting dude. and i really dont like reading songs.
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Re: Since I Woke Up Tis Morning
cheers guys...
and actually I was just playing some simple guitar riffs, typical ones that you'd hear in cowboy films and such....and I just started singing some dumb lyrics over the tunes, and this one just came out on the spot..
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