Sound off

[AcidKat]

Let's here everyone's deep poetry. I know you have some. C'mon, I'm bored!

[psychoDiablo]

yeah that'd be tight.

in the mean time acidkat, check out the poetry forum. well the writer's forum.

most of everyone's shit is there. same with mine.

but il'l write this.

I've been wonderin about this for so long.
I really have been.
Its just that life could be so short.
I guess I want to know why?
Is it worth the life now,
Just to die?
Perhaps I'm missin something.
I still wouldn't be able to tell.
Or would I?
What is the point?
Where is the purpose?
Maybe I should just forget about it.
And carry on with my own damn life.

[AcidKat]

Heehee, I'm so new and stupid I didn't even find that. *dies*

[psychoDiablo]

yeah. another thing you shouldnt mention that ur new. lol

[AcidKat]

Damn. What's done is done.

[makilwen]

i gave you my trust
you betrayed me
I gave you my heart
you broke it
i gave you my body
you defiled it
i gave you my time
you wasted it
i gave you my love
did you return it?

[AcidKat]

ooooooooh

[psychoDiablo]

Originally posted by makilwen
i gave you my trust
you betrayed me
I gave you my heart
you broke it
i gave you my body
you defiled it
i gave you my time
you wasted it
i gave you my love
did you return it?

oh, that is good.
at first i thought it was going to be something i've read before, but the last line killed that idea. that was dope! it was like out of nowhere. hellyea.

[makilwen]

yup ^_^ just was like hmm deep poem and then thought of how hurt I was by my last betrayal, add some grief with a pinch of talent and viola' poem ala Makilwen.

[psychoDiablo]

yep. and its all true too. you give and you give, and they give everything back. except for that one true feeling...the love that you gave. stupidassholes, they take that shit for granted!

[AcidKat]

Wow, a male that realizes this! I am in a state of shock.

[AcidKat]

I just realized how short and dumb that last post was. I am not sexist. I am observant. And I beleive that the male and female genders can coexist peacfully. There, no no one can be mad at me. Nya! :tongue:

[psychoDiablo]

Originally posted by AcidKat
Wow, a male that realizes this! I am in a state of shock.

yes that is right AcidKat. i say get to know me. il'l be the sweetest psycho you'll ever meet. haha


so yeah, anyways, wehre's ur deep poetry post for this thread?

[AcidKat]

Who me? My poetry? Heh, I would love to be able to write poetry like maki, but my writing is more short story type stuff. I'm horrible with poems, but I love them. That's why I wanted to get other people to post some so I could read it. This was before I knew there was a writing/poetry forum.

^-^ I like psychos. I wish Johnny the Homicidal Maniac were a real person. I would like to meet him. Then I would die. Yaaaaaay.