some nonsense right quick..

[psychoDiablo]

everything seems cool.
nothing is broken.
something is always missing,
you just got to pay the token.
life's not long enough.
go on. move on.
You'll never get enough.
accept it and go.
fuck all the bullshit.
there's no time.
Learn to feel for what's right,
Soon it'll make sense. In due time.




hit it up...

[Thrice]

Short and sweet. Very compelling and moving words. Yet in insightful and full of truth. very good

[psychoDiablo]

well it may be the end for me. that's how i wrote it on the paper i just found, but i want you guys to keep it going...i know you could come up with some lines, just try :)

[Thrice]

ok, its off the top of my head, here goes.

As the day goes, i try to think why
Self-indulgence make me wanna cry
I've been sitting with this bottle in my hand
empty with your lies, that's your brand
The time is end for me
I take the bottle and see
down with the torment, down in a drink
a drink formented your killing wink

yeah... thats all i got

[Grunt]

thats pretty compelling stuff. so much feeling...

i like

[Thrice]

thanks. This is all FRESH off my head

I time to draw your dagger deeper
Deeper in the lies by the blood
A rusty wense or blasphemy
You are the source of my dimise
I wanna take you picture
and hold were i can see the pain
hanging from my bed post
held inside a broken frame
So take this dagger i am wheilding
And hold high and proud
and press it deeper in my flesh
surrounded by the lies...

Ok now im fresh out. Im gonna go get some grub.

[moocow44]

everything on this thread was great. :smile:

[psychoDiablo]

dude, thrice, that's shits dope.

time to lose you all.
a vacation for my head.
no more thinking.
i need some rest.
time to move away.
start all over again.
until the day,
where i pick right up
from where i left off.
a cycle complete.
now a question from me,
to myself...
Was it all worth it?
You fool it better have been.

eh, heh

[psychoDiablo]

its not over yet.
I still see some hope.
If things dont work through,
Just another chance to learn to cope.
Theres still some time.
Keep on writing this rhyme.
I see it happening.
i feel it coming.
trying to run.
nowhere to hide.
later on down the line,
i dont want to think i shouldve just died.
maybe you could be there.
the one holding my hand.
Guide me through this.
bring me back to land.

[jayhay0]

wow.
i wish i could think all deep like you guys can. thats awesome stuff...

[psychoDiablo]

its not that you wish you could. its that you can.

for me, i just started writing. of course as every beginner they arent all that great. but i did have a talent for it. from there i continued to write and pretty soon, writing turned into a way of expressing myself. its hard for me to express how i feel talking to someone. but if i wrote it down, i'd be able to get out every little detail. i dont know why...unless of course i'm talking aloud to myself..

ya just gotta write and pretty soon u dont even realize that youre writing it. dont even know that ur thinking. start off with a couple lines and idea of where its going to go, then after that just let if flow and it turns out its something totally different than what you had planned. i am happy i can write :) such a beautiful talent!

thx jay, moofreak everyone else.

[moocow44]

writing is a beautiful talent.

[psychoDiablo]

does moo write? :ponder:

[Thrice]

Dude phycho, if that stuff is fresh from your head, or even if you only thought about it for 5 minutes, im falling out of my chair impressed. Otherwise, im still very impressed. You have a thing with words

[psychoDiablo]

actually 2 of those i have written down on paper from before. but i just thought they'd fit in here.

[Thrice]

believe it or not those two were right out of the top of my head. Words have just always come natural for us, psycho

[psychoDiablo]

yes. always had a way with words.
lol its pretty down and i like it. haha

[psychoDiablo]

Someday love will find you.

Get hurt. Fall down. Get your own fucking crown, crumpled to pieces.
You keep fighting. Take the pain. Give your all. Feel the gain. Only to have it,
All thrown back into your face.
And you fall again.

Someday love will find you, they say.
You want to believe them. You really do.
But the way shit happens...

Fuck everything you say.
And you fall, yet again.

Someday,
Love. I will find you.

[Thrice]

i like. Its very interesting and make you think.

[psychoDiablo]

wandering in time.
this question in mind.
why am i still so blind?
why cant i find,
the meaning of mine?
its in front of me.
its looking right back at me.
still i cant see.
even after knowing all this.

wrote that ^ back in october
--------------------------------------------

something i had my mind on earlier.

That hand to hold.
That body to hold.
Hair to smell.
Those eyes that stare.
Such a precious moment.
Feelings of drifting through air.
Lost in companionship.
Hearts beating faster.
Patterns of committment.
Promises around laughter.
Times to share.
Feelings, emotions, memories.
Moments so rare.
That's,
What it is all about.
-MCR-

[psychoDiablo]

Originally posted by psychoDiablo2
Someday love will find you.

Get hurt. Fall down. Get your own fucking crown, crumpled to pieces.
You keep fighting. Take the pain. Give your all. Feel the gain. Only to have it,
All thrown back into your face.
And you fall again.

Someday love will find you, they say.
You want to believe them. You really do.
But the way shit happens...

Fuck everything you say.
And you fall, yet again.

Someday,
Love. I will find you.

anyone ever write anything, then later you read it again and it just touches you?
like this, for me, i dont know how long its been since i wrote that. maybe a month? but i just read it again right now, and i dunno..but it just reaches out ot me. probably cuz i wrote it? i know what its saying...but still ya know? i mean i've written lots and some poems just dont appeal to me as when i wrote them. i just amaze myself sometimes...ya know, i should be more proud of myself...and im not.
but yeah, ever write something and read it again later and makes you cry or whatever?

[Blood Red]

how the hell can you quote yourself ?

lol :rolleyes:

[psychoDiablo]

heh i just did sucka!

why the hell not?
how the hell you not gonna answer the question !

[psychoDiablo]

Its only my first time.
Every single day.
Won't be the last time.
That I can guarantee.
But what if it so happened,
That around the way.
A certain fate is waiting.
I wouldn't know it.
I'd be controled by it.
And that's just it.
I won't have it.
To be controlled
Just to die.
It's all fucked up,
Let me cry.
I know this is life.
but why o why!

I'll stop before the bend.
You should know what happens then.
I took a new direction.
That fate wasn't ment.
and it always feels like you are wrong.
sitting at home.
head in front of the bong.
smoke arises into my face.
i smell the smell.
such a sweet taste.
blown and baked.
my body like batter.
i wish for only something better.
and i'll sit and stare for one hour.
what a way to live this life.
god damn what a way to live.

[psychoDiablo]

Let me spit,
For the words I have to say,
Have no equal.

Disrespect.
Dishonor.
Its horrible.
Terrible.
Lies. Cries. Good ol highs.
The good times,
Such life.

Blocking. Hating.
Having to puke.
It makes me sick.
God, It's all so ugly.