Empty Graves and Memories

[Sweathog]

A space so full of silence,
a silence so full of sound.
Down the muddy paths,
where the graves grow under the ground.
Cherubim and serafin present
old candles, dead flowers
their clothes.
In a place so full of memories,
in a space so full of sound,
in a place of worn out worries,
there grow graves under the ground.

[Sweathog]

So what do you think people?

[spadetje]

I like it

[Penie]

its good, i like it a lot.

i could be wong, but the rhythem in a few lines is a bit of, for exampole shouldnt the last line be somthing like :
"there grow graves underNEATH the ground"?

[Sweathog]

Fair comment. I agree with you actually.

[jayhay0]

i like it too. strong stuff.

[Sweathog]

How so? I would like to here your interpretations.