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Sir Auric
03-08-2006, 10:38 AM
Taking tones of sweetness from your dish of bitter doom...

I'm engulfed with this one dream, and you are tethered by my wish.

Anxiety in terrored times, when resting is not real...

Never ending purgatory, mass infused denial.

Laughter in my chambers, crying in my sleep.

Surprise, speed, and malice...take this (give) that you see.

Annex your first shallow wonder, breathing blessed and stolen.

Do not evolve from ridicule and silver cretin scars.

SketchImpressions
03-11-2006, 12:55 PM
is this about having nightmares of someone?

I love the poem, great spinning or words. "tethered by my wish" lots of wonderfull phrases your created that tug at the imagination.

Sir Auric
03-15-2006, 10:07 AM
Why, thank you.

It was a bit sporadic, really.

I just churned it out.

My mind was reeling, and I just spouted out what I was thinking.

psychoDiablo
03-15-2006, 09:10 PM
the hells this about and why'd you put give in paraenthesis?

Sir Auric
03-20-2006, 10:24 AM
Ya know, I'm not sure, actually.

Like I said, this one will take me a while to decipher.