A Rant (In Response to Mud)

[Sir Auric]

I hate you who bring your scars and tell me that they're mine.
I hate you who tear me down and slaughter my good times.
I hate you with bitter tongues who beat me to the ground.
I hate you who think that you will land without a sound.

I hate you who disregard the beauty that makes tears.
I hate you who torment hearts and shred them with the years.
I hate you with bloated heads and pockets lined with gold.
I hate you with shallow minds and zero self-control.

[Summer Gurl]

Ohh i like it!

[Sir Auric]

I don't like most people...I'm just tolerant of their stupidity.

[Summer Gurl]

hehe understandable

[MudPuppet]

I feel honored.

[Sir Auric]

You should.

It's not about you, just in responce to your rant.

I don't like people so much...but, does that make me emo?

[*Lady Macbeth*]

You did not just try to rhyme 'mine' with 'times' did you? And the word 'gold' does not rhyme with 'self-control'.
And what the hell happened to meter?

You make a great emo poet. As in, a fantastic emo poet. You're just about the best emo poet on this site.

None of this is real.
It's just not real.
Maybe it wasn't meant to be real.

But if you hate people, describe them, don't describe what you hate about the world in general.

Thanks for the read

[Sir Auric]

Interesting reply...I've never considered myself an emo poet...

Now, I think that I will have to dedicate an entire train of thought to being as emo as possible in the next poem I write.

This poem was intended to be a joke.

[psychoDiablo]

the word emo isnt real.

your poem just sucked. too lame. it was like you forced that crap out and you know it's crap.

your words do rhyme. mine, time. sound the same, close enough. gold, control, yes , sound the same. alliteration my friend, sound good doesnt it? even near the end.

[Demento]

Interesting reply...I've never considered myself an emo poet...

Now, I think that I will have to dedicate an entire train of thought to being as emo as possible in the next poem I write.

This poem was intended to be a joke.
I wouldnt be too flattered about being an 'emo poet'. That just means you write shitty poetry.

[Sir Auric]

I wouldnt be too flattered about being an 'emo poet'. That just means you write shitty poetry.

Yeah...we know that noone reads my poetry.

This was a bad poem, but that's how I intended it to be.

I churned that out in, like, 43 seconds.

I was spoofing on the emo rant that Mud pooted out the other day.